Blog 12- how did I revise my Literacy Narrative

The way I revised my Literacy Narrative was to first do some free writing on everything that was on my mind. This was good so I can grab a focus on what I thought my Literacy Narrative was about and also to clear my thoughts. AFter I did that I found one important theme.. That was that I struggled as a writer because I let other peoples opinions influence me. I then wrote an entirely new introduction and read over my entire Literacy Narrative. I still struggled to revise cause I felt that most of my paper flowed with my introduction. Nevertheless, I revised a couple of sentences and even added on to one paragraph.